Prompt 25 Response: Travelling Through Poetry


I

Fencelines

I drove three hundred and fifty miles across the land I love.

Fencelines flashing by, and I’m reminded of

stories of the early settlers and their jealous awe

at the sound of pounding hooves, millions strong

and how quickly those herds disappeared.

And each field once bound only by the horizon

is sliced up by the portion that a man can handle.

It’s the fenceline that inspires a man;

the mark of what’s his, the piece of land to hand down the family tree.

But it’s just a fenceline, there is no guarantee

that his time here will be remembered

any more than the Permian sea;

which was–then left. 

I just don’t believe the promises of fencelines can be kept

because nothing will outlast this Kansas wind.

Our fencelines, the trees, the bison, even the sea

have a boundary in time, the place we all call “The End”


II

The descent feels good.

But when I look up,

the path is longer than before.


III

I’m the half owner of a secret,

a memory shared with a man without any.

What we were building up on the hill above the thicket

may never be known by the next owner of the lot.

Grandpa did the building til his knee got too bad.

But he also got sick, lost his mind

and with it, the memories he had.

So we haven’t been back to that tree with two trunks.

But I know it’s still there, so today I hiked up

through the ivy and brush. 

Across the creek bed, I climbed the bank along the deer run,

then further up where the cedars stand.

I traced the old trail following a void of low branches–cut by hand.

It took a while, but I found it.

Since we’ve been gone, maybe fifteen years,

the southern trunk has cracked, and started to fall.

Both are still living, but just the one is still standing tall.  

I climbed up it.

The view is gone.

The forest has grown up.


IV

What was hoped for will never be.

If only the sorrow stopped with me,

it might be well.

But for some, hope is all that is left

and sorrow is the only glimpse of hell

they will ever see.


V

How much farther must I go to show my love?

If there were a line, I’ve crossed it.

If it were graded, I’d have overshot the curve.

If it were tried, any jury would have my side.

But there is no measure, no rule, or prize

for the height of love shown when Jesus died.

So to love too, I’ll forfeit my right to claim my share

and wait for the day when I’ll love without care.


VI

The World Reveals Itself To Those Who Walk It

The first on the trail sees the deer

But it isn’t only for this the path was blazed

For this city, pockets are carved

for the forest to be,

for the citizenry to breathe

and walk a while among the wild things.

Some places get too good.

Every home is up to code and the yard is manicured

and the families race through their lives as fast as they can.

That’s what the highway is for;

to keep us buying as fast as we consume

and devoting our lives to daily commutes.

To assume the driver’s seat, you’ll no longer see

the world beneath your feet,

only where you’re going as fast as the car ahead.

The deer here are all dead.

The trail is for what the world is for–miracles.

They exist everywhere they aren’t expected.

To dull the doubts, this assurance blesseth.


VII

A Good Review

Racing down the highway of life

running low on fuel,

hoping for a stop to rest – really rest.

But so many of these exits feel forced upon me;

developed only to sell something to those who have to buy,

to prey on their haste as they too race by.

But I’ll hold out.

There’s gotta be a special spot 

to rest a bit and stretch our legs out.

Empty tank coming and I’m counting down.

Baby wakes up, crying to get out.

And through the trees I see 

half a sign “Cooper’s Coffee and Eatery”

filling station next door – Score!

Immigrant entrepreneurs just opened in May.

Best breakfast sandwiches a bagel can make.

Lattes with perfect leaves and  a wonderful taste.

Quality is always worth the wait.

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